Which will you choose, a State company or a Private company?
Outline:
1/ Introduction:
I prefer working in a private company to working a state company.
2/ Body:
+ A private company pays higher salary and it’s easy to rise.
+ A private company has international working environment and better working conditions.
+ It’s easier to have a suitable working position , which depends on your own ability.
3/ Conclusion:
I rather work in a private company.
SHORT ESSAY
I was born and grew up in a poor family that both my parents were teachers. I strongly belived that every Tet holiday when my old friends had new clothes or a large amount lucky money, my brothers and I still wore the old clothes and had just a little money or no money. Now my older brothers work for an international company, Prudential Vietnam, so my family conditions are changed very much.I’m learning about English and my fututre plan is working for a pivate company, not a state one.
Nowadays the most worthy problem to a worker or a student who has graduated from University is salary.Working for a state company , you’ll receive a low salary about 1.5 to 1.8 million, a small amount of money that is not enough to meet one person needs; while the salary of a private one for the stater is about 3.5 to 3.8 million depending on your position.Moreover, if you work in a state company ; for example you are a teacher, it takes you 3 years to be raised your salary coefficient, at that time your salary will be increased from 200000 VND to 500000 VND, a very small money,too. But working in private company , you will receive an added bonus if you work well.
I love the international environment of private companies. Working on time is a must, especially when you work in the Japanese companies.In addition to this, its environment is full of competion and requestes you to know how to contrive many difficult new situations. Moreover; private companies that many of them are international companies have investigated a lot of money , modern and well-equipped technologies, so they have better conditions to interest the talent engineers or architectes… than in state companies.
The final thing that I like private companies is the chance to do in here. It’s said that the employers of these companies wanting to employ the person by his own abilities not by his large relatioships.So, it’s easy for you to have a worthy position if you are well-educated. However; you seldom have a good working position in a state one. I think this will limit many chances for the person having true ability without the large relationship.
Thứ Sáu, 23 tháng 10, 2009
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INTRODUCTION (1ms)
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