Thứ Bảy, 31 tháng 10, 2009

My private Heaven

1/ OUTLINE
+/ Thesis: my most impression is my grandmother's "army vegetable garden".
+/ Body:
. located: near the 1A national highway, in front of her house.
. variety of vegetables:
The cabbage : big , fresh- like an army being willing to fight with enough weapons.
The califlower: as white flower with widely open eyes, and its leaves to safe its eyes.
. Besides: onion, Chines parsley, flagrant knotwed,etc beds.
* All are taken care of by her warmly, clever hands. It not only provides the safe, nutritious food but is the source of her joy.
+ Conclusion:
It's my private Heaven helping me learn how to work and understand the true worthy of working from the daily life.
2/ ESSAY:
My grand mother's house is the Heaven to me. There are many fruits: mango, banana, jack fruit, etc and a garden of colourful flowers: rose, daisy, orchid, for-get-me-not,... But my most impression is her "army" vegetable garden.
The garden is near the 1A National Highway and in front of her house.So when you pass over her house, you can easily see it. I call it the " army" vegetable garden because of the variety of vegetables: cabbage, letture, califlower,... In the center of the garden is the cabbage bed. The cabbages with big , fresh and green leaves look like the volunteer young girl who are still twentyish. Next to the cabbage bed is the califlower with widely open eyes, and their leaves are long covering over their eyes as the arm of a mother protecting her child when he/ she is young.
In other small ground, my grandmother plants other vegetables ,such as: onion, Chinese parsley, flagrant knotwed that are not as much as the above vegetables. But it play an important role in her daily life because it makes the food more smelly and dilicious.
The garden is taken care of by her warm,clever hands. She waters it, takes the worms away and weeds everyday, therefore it's difficult to find out any worms or weeds in here. Although it's not over large, about 400 meters, it provides not only the safe, fresh food but the source of her joy after the hard working days.
The garden isn't so large but it has become my private Heaven. Everytimes I visit her, I find out an interersting new lesson about how to plant or seed a kind of vegetable. Especially, I learn how to work and I also do understand the worthy value of working from the daily life.

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  1. INTRODUCTION (1.5ms)
    - Background, hook 0.5
    - Thesis statement 1
    BODY (4.5ms)
    - Good ideas 2
    - Coherence, unity, development 1.5
    - Language: Grammar, vocabulary (1)
    CONCLUSION (2ms)
    - Summarize (1)
    - Lesson, suggestions (1)
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